Problem: If "Jim signaled the barman and gestured toward his bathroom key.", is "Jim signaled the barman and gestured toward The barman's bathroom key." correct?

Answer: yes


Problem: If "Mark was close to Mr. Singer's heels. He heard him calling for the captain, promising him, in the jargon everyone talked that night, that not one thing should be damaged on the ship except only the ammunition, but the captain and all his crew had best stay in the cabin until the work was over.", is "He heard Mr. Singer calling for the captain." correct?

Answer: yes


Problem: If "Susan knew that Ann's son had been in a car accident, so she told her about it.", is "Susan told her about it." correct?

Answer:
yes